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個人陳述的開頭部分這樣寫才吸引人

時間:2018-11-16 16:57來源:未知 作者:quanlei_cai 點擊:
個人陳述的開頭部分主要有兩個作用:作為總括性段落,這是你捉住讀者注意力的機會,吸引評審教授讀下去的情趣和欲望;好的開場自然吸引讀者使他們投入你的文章,驅動他們仔細地閱讀你的個人故事,總括性段落的結尾得有個小結,承上啟下。總的來說,招生官閱讀個人陳述肯定是從開頭部分開始的(切記,個人陳述不是文學作品,不需要用什么倒序、插敘、先分析再總結等方法,關鍵詞里面的包含的信息,直截了當寫出來就好了),一個好的開頭,不一定會加分,但一個糟糕的開頭,絕對會造成很大的影響。下面我們就談個人陳述的開頭部分怎么寫。 開
個人陳述的開頭部分主要有兩個作用:作為總括性段落,這是你捉住讀者注意力的機會,吸引評審教授讀下去的情趣和欲望;好的開場自然吸引讀者使他們投入你的文章,驅動他們仔細地閱讀你的個人故事,總括性段落的結尾得有個小結,承上啟下。總的來說,招生官閱讀個人陳述肯定是從開頭部分開始的(切記,個人陳述不是文學作品,不需要用什么倒序、插敘、先分析再總結等方法,關鍵詞里面的包含的信息,直截了當寫出來就好了),一個好的開頭,不一定會加分,但一個糟糕的開頭,絕對會造成很大的影響。下面我們就談個人陳述的開頭部分怎么寫。
 
開門見山法
先點出重點,再依據事件發生順序,將所見所聞寫出:
I was lucky in the fact that I picked chemical engineering and it turned out to be the right choice for me. However, my first semester at college was a rude shock - being away from home for the first time, being in a relatively male-dominated field
I started in a test lab for airplanes, where I got to break things. That is called static and fatigue testing. Then I went into design for airplanes. I worked on all areas of commercial planes including the floors and windows. I am most proud of my testing projects
 
 
引用法
開頭引用各種資料,加以引申,達到吸引讀者,幫助突出中心的作用:
When asked how to manage to mask remarkable statues, the French sculptor Auguste Rodin answered, “I choose a block of marble and chop off whatever I don''t need.” For me, life is just a block of marble---whether the marble can be turned into a remarkable statue depends on your natural talents, diligence and a sense of duty. During over four years’ my college life, I have been dreaming of being a perfect female researcher so that I can enhance more young girls’ confidence in scientific research and encourage them to promote the development of science as men do.
 
精辟設喻法
留學ps開頭設喻,以引起讀者對要說明的事物或道理的興趣:
“Life is just like the ocean----whatever choice you make as a steersman, you must be well aware of your favorite, namely, which is worthy of pursuing in your whole lifetime!”
Since I was admitted into ××× university three years ago, these words, just like a bright lamp, have been lightening my future and leading the way to my favorite career--- the studies of educational technology.
 
背景漸入法
1、 美國留學個人陳述開頭引入家庭背景
My father is a chartered accountant and my mother is a banker. During my days at Engineering College I used to go to my father’s office and help him manage his portfolio of equities and other financial instruments. This was the time I learnt the first lesson of finance from my father i.e. risk and return are proportionate. In 1998 when I was in the second year the China stock market crashed. But fortunately, my father had a well-diversified portfolio because of which our returns were protected from the downside risk. This was when I learnt the second principle of finance from my father i.e. diversification reduces risk. While I understood these two principles intuitively, it produced in me a strong urge to learn and understand the complex theory behind the working of Finance. This, I believe, was a turning point in my career. I made up my mind to pursue a career in Finance and hence decided to do a Masters program in Business Administration.
2、 引入特殊事件,闡述興趣的起源
As I was finishing college, my mother had both of her hips replaced with artificial ones because all of the cartilage in her hip joints had worn away and it was very painful for her to walk. I found it fascinating that engineers, orthopedic surgeons, and biologists had all worked together to design these artificial joints that completely transform people''s lives by giving them back pain-free mobility, and I knew at that moment that this was an area about which I wanted to learn more.
 
注意!以下類型開頭最好不要出現:
1.重復簡歷型--單純重復簡歷里已經有的內容。
2.學校介紹型--介紹自己的大學學校,有一種為自己的學校進行推銷的感覺。
3.抄襲句式型--例如:抄襲很多文章已經出現的詞和句式,錄取委員會的老師喜歡原創。
4. 救世主型--例如:開頭表明自己拯救世界的抱負。
5. 猶抱琵琶型--例如:問題切入之前,說很多對自己很有意義的重大影響,浪費字數。
6. 幼稚型--例如:說明自己的好奇心,用很多小事來證明。



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